From the very first beat
on the day you are born
your own heart starts bleeding
till the day you are gone
With that in mind do not be mistaken...
No candle is lit
so how about you and me
I really don't like that the word from the title is used in the poem itself, but for this one I made an exception.
Wow, the last five lines gave me shivers. Nicely done!
Something abut this bothers me(maybe the cheese end), but all in all it has a great sounding!