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From the very first beat
on the day you are born
your own heart starts bleeding
till the day you are gone


With that in mind do not be mistaken...



     No candle is lit

                forever

     so how about you and me
 
     burn down
           
                together
I really don't like that the word from the title is used in the poem itself, but for this one I made an exception.
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StarryStarrySky7267 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, the last five lines gave me shivers. Nicely done!
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IVLINwastaken Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks Sarah, 
you made me blush again... :)
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Kikus13 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Something abut this bothers me(maybe the cheese end), but all in all it has a great sounding!
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IVLINwastaken Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for feedback! I'm glad to hear that 

(now since you put it like that, I might see it as cheesy as well, haha)
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